Your Big Chance to Critique My Work

Ian Lurie Feb 7 2007

I’m trying a bit of my own internet direct marketing techniques this week, with a promotion around my company’s new consulting programs:

consulting

https://www.portent.com/services/strategy

I would greatly appreciate any feedback folks might have…

tags : conversation marketing

2 Comments

  1. Alain Jourdier

    Alain Jourdier

    Ian, I like what your offering. My only critique is that there’s just way too much information for one page….can you break it down?

  2. ian

    ian

    Hi Alain,
    An interesting point. I’ve pondered breaking it up into pages and kept it as one in the tradition of the long sales letter.
    I may try both and test them against each other…

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